Toren's confession pg. 1

LOL! it's so sappy and corny right???? well anyway, this would really be page 2 but I was just too lazy to draw page 1. so the story is this:

toren has a thing for khail but khail likes Puzzle (go look in my gallery) and toren doesn't know what to do. Khail and toren have been good friends for a while and toren is sort of a delinquent so he believes that this aspect of him makes people not love him. When he starts saying those things in the5th panel, he's quoting what some other girls have said to him before. Even tough he knows he has a slim chance, he goes for it anyway in an attempt to spark something between them so that khail will pay more attention to him.

anyway, this is just how i see the confession going. I think u could add this to the puzzle series thing and I were gunna do (not sure if we're still gunna do it) Toren belongs to her BTW!

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